‘serPina biNary
by Carmela Cohenconjunction
Highly Commended, April 2010
Judged by Fiona Sampson
barely rains, rarely, but for the morning residue of grapes. wine chased down by apple gait by dappled tannin bombs replacing the very sour hours. delinquent hours. bald refrain of arpeggio pain replete with teething, antecedent shame and windows, windows plagued by gaping thoughts of trains, derailed weather vanes span the mottled stretchers. here the masters cluster disapproving stares shuffle whispers; the glaring difference in years. here the gilt ridden host of clear coasts begins to burn cinnamon, the toast. fenestration for opportunity’s sake. the spur of the prosperous moment casts aspersions aside while focusing on desire’s bloodshot eye. tell me, tell me obliquely, about getting laid off feeling infinitely screwed, used. maturity's security. making do with defense mechanism’s helium cocoon. mulling over- heard mentalities in the corral of modality. baby baby. me metatarsenal. smash. come from hind baal bush, shellack. i grow down goose- bound. mustachioed splashed brackish kitsch koosh? to waste away dusty, douche without tasting touching tipsy lip to lip, pipslip hip to big dipper shlook your butterfly zipped a smidgeon a smudge of vulnerability. tish toosh splishplash of eyelash, chance come prance, compress. stress test love. my flower. bed.
Highly commended or its elegant shape (among shaped concrete poems); for its successful accumulation of thoughts, tropes and things from small-town anomie; and for its incidental wit – “fenestration / for opportunity’s sake”. --Fiona Sampson