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Winning Poems for July 2008
Judge Tony Barnestone



Feast of Disappointments
by Linda Cable Wild Poetry Forum I have come to the potatoes, paring them down swiftly, chanting your sins to the sink until I hold another offering, haphazard orbs the color of old eggs and I choke on the smell of mud. A room away you snore, clutching at visions, dreaming of butter, gravy and youth. I have seen your belly rise, fall, still aching for round things; sweet breast of melon, pickled cucumbers biting your sun broken lips, the rain taste of green grapes; ever a man of appetites. In the fields, you confessed, pulled up my skirt with no concern for the fallow years. Now we are about potatoes; the ticktock of consuming roots in silence, ignoring the pull of the scythe. During those blind years we knew nothing of wasted nights, two beds, pressed against separate walls. I boil Canaan with turnips, served up on wedding plates. Seventeen, Before the First Time by Ange Law thecriticalpoet.com Shoulder pout like Harlow. Inciting reaction, mouth a buzz full of bees. She slams a mirror door, glass splinters- catch tongue. Wonders what it's like to slash your wrists flapper style. Conjures scarysexy to suck with heretic teeth. In the garden, genuflects to the god of lipstick, makes her mouth arterial, backhanding red across the intrusive flowers. Stalks through grass three foot high desperate for knowledge of passion. Lying in it, grasps handfuls of green, twists, then it's... his hair a catch kiss of curls, his eyes dark as dejected pews on Sunday. In a furnace face blast, she orgasms spontaneously, lets go laughing...laughing. Scrapes shiny off the sun, smears her body with forty- eight shades of golden. Roots by Ken Ashworth The Writer's Block When I was a kid, I never knew why one leg breaks the whole horse, or how a circle the size of my thumb pulls the whole ocean after it, but I learned all there was to know about girls behind Brindle's barn when Alice Paxton broke my tooth out with her lunch box for trying to slide my hand up her whithers and cop a feel. I stood there in a moment of half disbelief slivering my tongue in and out of the slot that was now not-tooth, the taste of an old penny strong at the back of my throat, watched as she worried the hem of her dress, smoothing and re-smoothing that spot my hand got to. Her eyes began to well and she burst out in tears, terrified I might have swallowed it. We searched for it until dusk, scuffled clumps of hay with our feet exposing the soft underbelly of loam that was both not-earth and not-manure, until there was just enough light left to make our way down the fence line, fingers tipped together across the top wire, both of us knowing that soon, she would turn and disappear within a twist of green corn rows and I would watch until she became smaller than the stalks, then go on. That night I dreamed the tooth took root and grew into a tree like the one in the dream of Nebuchadnezzar which covered the whole earth, and I wove my way among its branches to the one which stopped just at her window, slipped inside sucking a wet handkerchief. Smell of dung still fresh in my shoe treads I slid in beside her holding my breath, sifting her hair with my fingers, trying hard not to wake her and to conceal the bulge in the maw of my jeans; the medicine bottle where I kept the tooth. Drowse by Bernard Henrie poets.org Sunburned water lilies, a dozen birds fly up stunned. The cat moves room to room, stops. Plums flicker out. Shiftless radios turn off. Afternoons fall deaf. Aftertaste by Brenda Morisse Wild Poetry Forum She sways to this half-tone day, staggers like smoke on a tight rope of discontent. The depth of forever passes for lilies in this muckheap. She has no head for the world and its free-for-all needlework of bill collectors and spiteful windows. The floor is cluttered with bottle caps and cans, so she drapes the sofa on the ceiling and hovers cross-legged and side-by-side with the overhead. If you ask me, she isn't a saint although she's very photogenic. Whoever heard of a pin-up saint hawking pilsner? Her mother nagged her to marry rich, but her heart was never a cash register. It's always been the beer: sweetish, malty Munich and the drier, hoppy Franconian. Her shoebox is filled with bits of broken jewelry: rhinestones and paste, pot metal and silver. Can openers. Hardware softened by careless spools of wires, head pins, eye pins, disheveled bracelets, wrong-way earrings. Orphans in this box have a way of tugging at heart strings. The ring is broken in. Remember when they were head over heels, before life warped the metal, and marriage became too hard to wear? The sum of her memories is tied in knots. I heard she was run out of town, a bartender with stigmata. It's not hygienic. Our St. Pauli call girl resists know-it-all-gravity and the attraction it mandates, contradicts spiked heels, prods her to wear a bra. Pompous gravity, bombastic gravity, she says. I will walk on water, I will stop time. I levitate. Get over yourself! She is younger than her adult children. She prefers polka dot baring midriff tops. Mardi Gras without Lent. Sleep by Tom Allen poets.org As when an old moose with wolves hanging from his ankles and rump and wolves grabbing for his face bulls his way bleeding to the edge of the lake and with all his last strength inch by inch fights to get deeper in until the wolves have to let go and at last he stands up to his nose in red water and watches the pack wandering helpless on shore falling back into the trees watches with eyes from which terror is draining

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