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Winning Poems for June 2008
Judge Patricia Smith



The Length of Never
by Steve Meador SplashHall Poetry How did the meadowlarks in Wichita remain invisible for over two years? Virgil showed up in the fourth grade with five baby rabbits crammed into a tan briefcase. Two died before lunch recess, one squashed at playground's edge when it took a wrong turn--Kevin stepped on it--and two dissolved into the wheat field from which they were plucked in the first place. Nature seemed bountiful that May. The walk home tripled in length with another relentless search for a yellow breast with the black V. Disappointment quadrupled by suppertime. We toured a grain elevator the next day. I watched the wheat-dotted blacktop fill with sparrows as my voice spilled a current of nevers on the man with the face like a dry riverbed. His voice was smoke and gravel, "Never means something will not happen forever. You should not say that." Out of the sun dropped a place named Vietnam, then we moved to Ohio, land of cardinals. Red spots dotted the trees and bushes. Shrewd crows attacked row after row of my uncle's corn. Straw men were useless. Killdeers faked broken wings, lured us into hope and away from their nests. Groundhogs burrowed under tillable soil, escaping from one hole as we dug at another. Still, the sparrows were everywhere. We shot them with BB guns, for a man hidden underneath a John Deere cap. He hated hordes, demanded that we line bodies up for the count. As dust and slivers of husks floated on his coffee he paid us for the deaths, talked about the war and how we would never lose. My voice was oak and mint. "Never means something will not happen forever. You should not say that." I was in Colorado recently and saw one, a meadowlark. I know now of intentions and accidents, of dark skies and unstable ground, of red spots and guns, of dropped grain that doesn't matter, of wars and when to dump coffee. I know now that never is a million sparrows later. A Fall from Grace by S. Thomas Summers Desert Moon Review Grandpa scales the fish before he removes its head or slices a thin line up its belly, spilling blood and water. He lodges his thumb deep in its throat, between gills -- clenches his fist around the skull. Jagged tool, a spoon with teeth, tears shimmer from flesh: a rainbow ripped from the soft air that lingers after morning storms. The tail curls toward the sun. Lidless eyes, still moist, leak disbelief. This is death. Gills flare like butterflies fanning purple wings. I ask if it hurts. Grandpa says Little bit, just a little bit. Outwitting Your Angels by Dave Mehler thecriticalpoet.com Use every animal ferocity be fierce as fire lovely fire they are made of and as willful use blood cunning fear shrewdly corporeal rightly and against them. They will not expect it either hate or applaud you. You require oxygen fuel sheltering sleep, you change in time-- alien, they do not--but twinned to you nonetheless. Use that. Be the compact wolverine squat underestimated harried by hunter pursued across tundra over rises who turns and charges knock him off his high loud horse the snowmobile his white wings over cloud froze high even before he can pull rifle from sheath stare him down unscratched unbitten till he will not no cannot shoot you even in war as you turn away make him admire you ashamed of himself. Be a virus relentless soulless machinelike repetitive producing like kind impervious fruitful godlike and love strange like that--no antibody will withstand no death touch you for long. Certain light heat lightning hot white quick or black black black he will shapeshift he you the muddy cornered pooch pathetic you a mutt pup pissing down your leg neck up back down saying here take it always outnumbered outgunned before you were born unable unchosen without gift of speech a vague dream a bark a whimper only canine teeth no power of thought really no imagination as it should be truly understood they understand yet know in the Presence even they must cover their faces with haughty wings still they superhuman cry they other laugh hear music you must be deaf to you uncomprehending sniff the air circular back leg scratch at an itch unreachable only skin deep. But think remember did He identify with did He die for them? He outwitted he became the wedge between you kyrie kyrie to your angel eleison you must look weak must but the secret is weak is the weapon they in hoary anger mirror horrible harbinge dark ancient awe guests, unwished for, unanimal yes the doorway you put off opening the facade hot cool cool hot layered the dog dressed up like death but you couldn't know didn't imagine death and everything you lost every buried bone come back to greet you. Spirit Catcher by Catherine Rogers Poets.org What do you do when it's full? I ask the proprietor. She frowns. She obviously thinks I'm not serious. Most people don't have that many evil spirits visiting their house. The glass orb winks and twirls on its thread. How many are in there now? They don't come here. Not to this shop. Too many spirit catchers hung in the window, too much lucky incense adrift in the still air. Runes and stones. I take up an amethyst, sure to protect against drunkenness, a gift for the dissolute. But what if--? She's doing the books. What if they foment a demon revolution? What if the last one in is a rotten egg? What if the shell cracks and leaks its malice all over the parlor? If we don't know how many angels can boogaloo on the head of a pin, how can we number the legions of lust and envy that can cram themselves into this delicate sphere? Too risky, thanks. I step into sunlight. I'll just have to handle my sins one at a time. Flood by Richard Evans MoonTown Cafe I thought if I waited, if I left wine, small purple flowers a polished coin, if I made secret prayers and with rituals blessed the dirt that would cake your boots when you came, then you would come. I thought if I wept, if I fucked with the thought of your face masking the face of the one who has taken your place and made of my bones a terrible shrine then you would come home. And I thought if I drove my children away, and drove myself mad, and cut through my palm and bewitched the windows of your friends with my watching - or if I stayed numb, silent and orderly, beached and counting the sum of your acts with white and black pebbles, one by one - then you would come home. Eight stars out and the station is calling. Not much to eat, the clocktower is gone. And where the rivermouth was now there's a market - the people seem surprised when it floods.

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