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Winning Poems for May 2008
Judge Patricia Smith



Sunday with Labrador
by Sarah J. Sloat The Waters My dog doesn't need the Church. She wants hands; she wants the vagabond, to lope and mosey with the whole body. My dog wants nothing to do with bloodshed or fluorescent lighting. She's here to unpack the grass. Don't try to teach her property. Like God, she's not industrious. She goes along, eating what she finds. Brown today, brown all day tomorrow. What April in New York Is by Guy Kettelhack About Poetry Forum You take your bony awkwardness into the April day -- too warm for May -- and yet the nearly naked trees are barely March: well, that's what April in New York is. Gold scrabbles here and there: forsythia: frail runty yellow feathers sprout from scanty soil -- buttering a toss of corners in the side-walked town: you stumble down the pavement like a scarecrow with a tooth ache: pretty close to true. (Another poem snatches pain from you and turns it into point of view.) If you are to love this city you suppose it can't be only when the two of you are pretty, which Lord knows, right now, my dear, you aren't. Currents lurch: bipolar -- hot/cold -- devil-zephyrs from the river twiddle with the ordinariness of people -- tourists: bodies are a weight and bother, something may be flourishing but it is not sweet human pulchritude. The sun's too rude, and flesh too blank and pale and bulbous and mistaken to be taken seriously. Mysteriously, though, you've got to have a taste of it: you take your aches uptown to Central Park -- decide to walk up to the Metropolitan Museum's art. All the geologic outcrops! -- rocks and runners! -- gray and unused to the light: squiggly growing green shoots make it impolite to stare: they'd clearly rather not be there, all embryonic in the glare. Damn the chronic pain of everything! -- and yet it paints a sort of wash of interest: splinters of a prickly sensibility that keep you walking and alert and almost happy with discomfort. Grandeur of the Met begets its usual surreal imperial effrontery: columns, steps and quandaries of what to look at first: but you are on a mission to do two things: see if your sore mouth can eat a sandwich in the cafeteria, then walk into the Pompeii bedroom painted gold and blue and red you caught a glimpse of on your television set that morning from your bed. The sandwich is a bust: leaves you scowling (the ghosts of both your wisdom teeth are howling): but oh! -- the room. Roman glory turns the page and places you in habitable plot. Let the April day resume. Via! by Allen M. Weber Desert Moon Review She likes to hike her dirty denim pants, to teeter on a trash receptacle-- the daring daughter of a spectacle that people pass without a sideways glance. Behind an Appomattox five-day fast, Miss Via's waking found her drunk and stark, balled up inside her three-wheeled grocery cart. She stretched and mumbled how she couldn't last in cities of her selves. In store-front glass she strikes a pose of someone else's life-- an author or a famous bastard's wife. If beetle-black reflections scurry past she'll trap them with the dash-like Emily. And if she carries tomes about the town-- because there's no good way to set them down-- the critic cites her incivility. Tonight beneath Graffiti Overpass, she flings tomatoes at her drying work daubed overhead. Ideas on a lark lean Via west like tributary grass before a petulant Atlantic : She may lumber through the lower altitudes, strip down the dress of urbane attitudes, and clamber above inhibiting scree. Out there she'll learn to taste untroubled air, to make her water on unpublished leaves, to rub her narrow rump on trunks of trees, to go as Appalachian as a bear. Fountain by Douglas Hill Wild Poetry Forum I recall the spiral down the spit-fountain in my father's dental chamber: I leaned too long over the sucking shiny throat, stalled, steeling against my return to his adept hands wielding instruments that would drill precisely into my fault. I lay back dry mouthed on that baroque black barbershop chair, as if for a trim, scissors on the sides; resigned to the rest, longing for a sip of water, some respite. He turned secretively as he would in the kitchen to decant a tumbler of scotch. The pestle riffed a hard hissing mantra: he urged it against the mortar, mixing the mystic silver-mercury amalgam; then into me flooded the moment of bonding more intimate than thirst: his soft warm fingers in my mouth. Marigolds by Sally Arango Renata South Carolina Writer's Workshop Rust scallops the red wheelbarrow, left too long in mud by the shed. Still, it carries the white rocks that have to be cleared from the garden - in time they'll be spread as a path. The handle on the short shovel is broken, but held right, it cuts sharp through stones and carries them to the mound of clippings, weeds, the alien balls of bound roots. The rose can use morning sun and composted dung. I trim dried buds and yellow leaves, more than one thorn penetrates my thin gloves. I take them off to mound the soil around the crown of root, leaving them off to stick my finger in sandy soil planting seeds. Peppers, tomatoes, broccoli, collards, I'll can what I can't eat -- or trade with the neighbor for pears when their tree is weighed, breaking, abundant. It was called a Victory Garden during the Big War when sugar and meat were rationed, but the garden for this war will be called Forgiveness, and I'll surround it with marigolds, so the souls can find their way home.

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