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Winning Poems for February 2009
Judge Elena Karina Byrne



Mondegreen
by Ray Sweatman Salty Dreams We're having a menage a trois on the kitchen table, the lobster, the light and me, the sun no longer a voyeur but a live and willing participant. And I was just saying to the lobster as I stroke his soft sacrificial flesh with iridescent butter: 'You see it undulating in this bottle? All I got to do is put a cork on it and it's mine forever.' But as soon as I try, the bottle spins and I'm in the closet edging closer and closer to lips that whisper, 'Make the most of it darling. Your 7 minutes are almost up.' And sure enough 1978 is 2008 and the gal in the closet is just another mistake trying to escape, singing 'Excuse me, while I kiss this guy.' Which I heard as 'Yes I'll marry you and we'll live happily ever after.' Meanwhile, my brother storms in the room booming his best Jersey soul, 'When i find my beautiful red watch!' He keeps right on looking and singing, under the bed, in the creases of the couch. While outside, they're trying to paint all the yellow school buses red as if time could be stopped in a brush of inspiration. And all the signs have been changed to read: 'Other than fish, no pets allowed." When at the door, it's both Merriam and Webster come to exchange all the old words which have lost their meaning for the lanky promise of brand new ones. 'Instead of love, happiness, bliss, hope, time, war, death and peace, I think it's time you try these: pescatarian, norovirus, mondegreen, prosecco, soju, endamame, dwarf planet, dirty bomb, wing nut.' 'But I'm still trying to figure out the old ones.' Merciless, they leave me to my hot tub, which is starting to boil like a tourist in a Jimmy Buffet song who just stepped on a pop tart as I try a few of those new words on my tongue and the light cackles like all things that won't be held captive when a tremendous hand reaches out to grab me like a hungry Adam longing for a rib in the Sistine Chapel. 'Endamame! Endamame! ' I shriek… But there's no one there to hear me except for the Captain of Noah's Returning Ark, who looks like a cross between the dwarf on Fantasy Island and the dude from Love Boat back from a long journey with solo animals who lost their mates along the way. Oh and Ulysses is there too, telling fresh tales from divorce court. 'What the hell? Did you think I was gonna wait forever while you have your fun with Sirens and Cyclops and whathaveyou!' And he's leading the animals in a singsong: 'Prosecco and Soju for everyone!' But I'm beginning to think it's just another stretch along Giraffe Highway, blue tooths, moon roofs and long necks lost in their respective mental safaris straining to see the goldfish in the trees and hear the muffled shuffle of strange folk walking crustaceans in the mondegreen horizon. Virginia Sings Back To the Stones In Her Pockets by Laurie Byro Desert Moon Review I must get the details right. How stones warbled to her from the garden for a fortnight or so. Troublesome, intrusive, they trilled while she weeded anemones. Beneath the ease of roots and thrust of new growth, they ingratiated themselves to her prodding callused fingers. They knew her sister was the lucky one, the one who skimmed flat-brimmed lake stones with the children. This one lay on the couch with her eyelids peeled back, mushroom capped stones rattling in the crèche of her eye sockets. Stones were faithful as vowels; they didn’t let her down. Night after night, her husband begged her to push them back into the gully of silence. Last night, she overturned another patch of fertile earth, brushing off the smooth and round. She pictures the summer table noisy with anemones and her sister’s brood. She is washed out, a little brown thrush. “Drab hen, frump” her sister will urge her to over come the day’s exacting brushes. I must get the colors right, melt down her charms to the bare-bone mauves and ochre. The stones will do their job shortly. Aggressive reds need to be given back to the soil—to the bridegroom river. We must empty out all the flecked mica chips from her pockets, the cloth’s blood stained lullabies, the stones last sweet songs. - by Eric Rhohenstein criticalpoet.org This only matters in that your eyes see it. Others like it don’t exist, are crumpled in a figurative corner: a paper-moat around a bin. They are bits of a scene in a lousy movie in which a man courts It is not a moat, but a ring. . . his stubborn bit of less-than-genius as if it were a butterfly worth netting. (Every x number of pupations, it stands to reason that a creature must emerge discolored, missing a wing – wholly not itself – as if by mandate: rise like the cream does! remember what the dream was! Perhaps in a movie it would be allowable to consider the more definite.) -slit- I gut it. It bleeds out the bottom. No. It’s the phantom wing, rising Scratch that. Have it falling where only one person hears it; the universe expands a bit / swallows nothing, this, sound

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